I can see the love in those sparkling eyes;
Those eyes many a fathom deep.
They tell me of things that can't be said,
For the eyes do the talking.
Everytime I look in them deep oceans,
I fight for some clarity of sorts.
Thoughts flow freely, like a mighty river.
Soon i'm asking myself-Is she the one?
Then a smile etches across my besieged face,
It accentuates the feelings from deep within.
The fear lifts, i see the light;
Only to realise that i've lost my sight:)
P:S-A modified version of my first ever poem:P
Written on 4th August,2007.
10 comments:
nice poem
:-) Too good.
You could have also put your original version here
Good one Kish....so how many times has this feeling repeated since you wrote. :-))
Ok. gud. who's the subject?
@sm
Thanks for visiting, and thank you.
@Insignia
The original has a different 'last' line. Wrote it for a female..
@ajeya
Good to see you back!
I'm glad to say it hasn't repeated.:)
@kshitij
Subject is immaterial now:)
hey!
nice poem :)
keep writing
@ A S
Thanks for visiting! Will do; come back for more:)
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